Step 1Try to remove the victim from the water immediately. If the person is still conscious and able to stay afloat, throw in a floating device or life preserver.
The signs were all there. The cries for help, the panic, the struggle to stay afloat. Yes, this lover of mine was most certainly drowning. Lost in life and love he begs me to save him. And I do. Who could not save a drowning man? I went to him and showed him everything he was missing. Everything that was possible. Frustrations so easily eased in the space between my thighs. Hurt so easily assuaged with my eager little mouth. I gave him passion. I gave him my flesh and my lust. I gave him his smile back. He drank me in like a man dying of thirst. Desperate gulps of my kiss and my wetness, my scent and my skin.
Step 2
If the victim is within reach, then use a long pole, stick or rope so they can have something to hold onto while you are pulling them out of the water.
It's so easy to give a hungry man nourishment. Feeding his beast with my willing little ways. Letting him have me whenever he needs me; letting him do whatever his heart and his hard on desire. To give him what he asks for. It is so natural to offer a lost man direction. Those moments in an orgasm's wake when the soul bubbles to the surface and you bear witness to truth and emotion. Support offered in kisses, sympathy, and understanding.
Step 3
If the person is too far out of reach, then try to swim out towards the person. Remember this should only be done by a good swimmer who knows some basic rescue techniques. The danger of an inexperienced person rescuing a drowning victim is the risk of being grabbed and pulled down by the victim.
Step 3
If the person is too far out of reach, then try to swim out towards the person. Remember this should only be done by a good swimmer who knows some basic rescue techniques. The danger of an inexperienced person rescuing a drowning victim is the risk of being grabbed and pulled down by the victim.
In the adrenaline rush of saving a life there is no thinking, just doing. In the consuming grip of lust you ignore the slips and the signs. I hardly notice that the fuck becomes making love; when whore or slut is replaced with baby girl or darling. It's so easy to overlook the obvious, to justify his need. I am his life preserver after all. I am the one who saved him from drowning. It's natural that you'd have appreciation for the one who rescued you. It's understandable feeling that you owed them your life.
So why am I so surprised when he takes my face in his hands, meets my eyes, and tells me "I've fallen in love with you"?
30 have whispered back:
Well...go back and read what you wrote. And read it from a man's perspective. Then you'll see why...
This. This is wonderful writing. I see shades of the best Anais Nin stories (the dirty ones) in this post. Specifically a story entitled "Pierre."
Keep it up doll.
My only response is "How could he not?" Beautiful, as always.
How could he not, indeed.
And yet the question that comes to my mind is: what of the rescuer? Isn't it natural that you might equally fall for the man you saved? Wouldn't you feel more than just the protective and nurturing instinct for a man who lays himself bare and vulnerable, for whom you open up your entire being as sustenance?
This is some great writing and the perspectives are great.
you shouldnt be.
"How to save a woman from drowning"
Take your foot off her head.
;-)
*Headdesk Facepalm Headdesk*
[Lather, rinse, repeat.]
And what is a woman with any modicum of empathy and feeling and humanity supposed to do with that man? Throw him back in the water and hold him under until he drowns in the misery of having been given hope and breath and life again, and then having it taken back?
*Cough* Just, um, asking hypothetically, of course... ;)
My first question is, “What now?!” Which is closely followed by, “How could he NOT eventually fall in love with you…” But then I think, is it possible to keep such a man “in the balance” – the place that makes you both happy and satisfied, yet balanced with the life you actually lead?
Now I’m going to think of you every time I go swimming…
Holy fuck, Chica.
That's a lot to think about, but hey, I am not surprised. You know how to reach me if you want to chat.
XOXO
CW
glub, glub...save me. (especially with regard to step 2.
*keeps rechecking the url to make sure she is reading Pocket Secrets...considers making popcorn*
In all seriousness...I've been there before. It's hard to be a savior and maintain admiration and respect. And it's hard to watch them drown too.
And as always, amazing writing, babe.
Ronjazz, but it's the same anyone would do. I'd do the same for you. I know you'd do the same for me. The understanding of that is what needs to be kept in mind.
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Awake, well hello there. If it's this post that brought you here then I am happy. Make yourself cozy. Stick around.
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Distracted, because he knew better. He was warned and reminded not to. Over and over. I see now though that a desperate man will indeed do desperate things.
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Kyra, hush now. Bite your tongue. That's just crazy talk.
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Sage, leave it to you to make me laugh!
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Ms. I., hypothetically. Of course. Not in some weird parallel Twilight Zone version either. And don't ask me what to do! I was hoping to follow the example of an in-the-same-boat girl I know, only she quit blogging before I had a chance to find out. The nerve.
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Unbroken, what now you ask? Now I tell him to get up. Shake himself off and snap out of it. And pray like hell he does so. It is a balance though and too far in either direction and you fall.
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CW, thank sugar. How about a drink instead? Make it a big one. XX
Max, big faker ;-)
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Lakey, fuck I thought I could slip this in without you seeing. Or Cate. Or L. Or Ms. I. Dammit anyway. You promised me this kind of lovey-dovey rainbows and unicorns crap wasn't contagious. BUT no "I told you so's" yet. I've got both feet firmly planted on the ground. I do!
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Mmm, you can save me anytime sug! I want your mouth to melt into mine!
um i've been reading this as a love story for a while now...
haven't oyu?
Thank You for my smile back Pretty!Swim with me off a tropical isle so I can return the favor... BTW I made it!
Good. Because even if you were getting all unicorns-shitting-rainbow-scented-kittens in love...you'd do it with someone who didn't need saving. That much I know.
Been there once (I think all strong, confident women have at some point), fuck...I'm STILL there, and extricating myself from it is proving to be utter hell.
Badside, I'll be your melt-in-the-mouth sugar baby anytime. Any. Time.
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Ms. B.I.G., you are indeed a bad influence. And you can just shush right along with Kyra. Thought you two were my friends ;-)
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Quiet, well all be damned. Now I am the one smiling. Looking forward to you.
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Lakey, I think I am addicted to being needed. I'm fucked.
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I have to wonder, is this a good thing or a bad thing? Or both?
Riff? Who is this and what have you done with Riff?
My friend. Please. You know me so much better than that. Go lie down for awhile I think you're feverish.
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I love the concept you chose to write this. Wow, though...see what did made fall in love with you. Now what? I know I cannot wait to read about it. Thanks for your beautiful writing.
vix
I love the way you wrote this
I shall have to read more
sn
Madam
You gave this man the one thing that any man, hell, any person desires most of all, attention.
And when it is the attention of a beautiful woman, how could he not fall in love with her?
Is your heart, your soul, cold enough to break his heart?
It would be kinder to open his veins.
SingleOne777
I stumbled across your blog and I'm in love with it. I'll be following =)
Vixen, thanks for the sugar, Sugar.
Now what? I haven't quite figured that part out yet.
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Secretly Naughty, why thank ya. I see Ronjazz sent you over. Isn't he the best?
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Single One, you fail to mention the easiest option of all....he can learn to swim.
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Mistress L, welcome sexy girl. I'm so glad you came over. Cocktail?
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Madam
Gently teach him and then let him go. That would be a good solution.
SO
About face. I love it.
Single One, awwww do I have to, he's such a good fuck.
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EZ, whose side are you on anyway?
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Great story I love it. That is the way to do it.
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